Red Panda-Chan

I liked it a lot. It was confusing though between the chapters where one is in someone's POV and another is someone else's. I think it would be better if ...

I really liked it! :D It was a good start to a story that pulls people in... Or at least me. There was some grammar mistakes in it but not ...

I think the last sentence just confused me... "First impressions were usually wrong, but I don’t know about my feelings for Chase though." I'm not sure... Just something about the ...

Hmm... This was good I liked Mr. McFowen and how it seemed he knew something was going to happen. There's not much of a problem in this story other than ...